Saw Laeserin (npub1m4n…c2jl)'s repost, took a look at the site. It looks pretty polished! Color theme and navigation feel natural, and it looks good on mobile.
My 2 cents is the "Why you need Nostr" value proposition starts with a negative. I'd suggest leading on a positive note. Talk about a shared online identity—that you control—across any number of sites and apps.
The calls to action are solid, especially once the feed behind the "Read some messages" button is ready.
After the "Create identity" screen, do you have links to signers or apps so a new user can jump in with the new identity?