Rich Puchalsky ⩜⃝ on Nostr: This poem presents special difficulties. It was written in 2013. Since then, it has ...

This poem presents special difficulties. It was written in 2013. Since then, it has been in some sense ongoing, although not mechanically ongoing. So... should I edit it? This is the first draft. When I think of the poem, I think of

"Will I have to die for them to be sure it's done?
But I've already died,"

and I think of it as "But I'm already dead," which is usually a sign that I should edit. But do I really want two versions of a never-ending poem?