Nice trailer BitcoinShooter (npub18hy…eavz) ! As a trailer editor myself, I want to share few thoughts.
I felt the first part was a little too long, not much but it could be 20 sec smaller, and then after 1.50, where you go to the second part, you need to introduce your "voice". Not actual voice but you have to share what this movie is about from the creator perspective! It is boring to go straight at a new part with all these testimonials and q's again without a break.
Separate the first from the second with a more inspiring music to change the feeling because the music of the second part sounds very similar to the first.
Please let's have a private discussion if you need any help with your trailer! I can't support you financially but I can work on your trailer free of charge. I am a trailer editor for 20+ years. Dm me for getting in touch! All the best, Yannis.
cutfree / Yannis Stergioulis
npub14e…0pvx7
2024-02-08 07:39:19
in reply to nevent1q…yxlm
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npub14elm06zs00zmqjccxnx3xeehfakjwq2dyzm5yf7jr3qlsej7cxls50pvx7Published at
2024-02-08 07:39:19Event JSON
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"content": "Nice trailer nostr:npub18hyl92mmr8uypkz4dc0w5d55uqa7ym8rqc3x2esmjjnj3s8vf6ds0zeavz ! As a trailer editor myself, I want to share few thoughts.\n\nI felt the first part was a little too long, not much but it could be 20 sec smaller, and then after 1.50, where you go to the second part, you need to introduce your \"voice\". Not actual voice but you have to share what this movie is about from the creator perspective! It is boring to go straight at a new part with all these testimonials and q's again without a break.\n\nSeparate the first from the second with a more inspiring music to change the feeling because the music of the second part sounds very similar to the first.\n\nPlease let's have a private discussion if you need any help with your trailer! I can't support you financially but I can work on your trailer free of charge. I am a trailer editor for 20+ years. Dm me for getting in touch! All the best, Yannis.",
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