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Asa on Nostr: COUNT-IN Practice room, 2am. The mirror is done with me. Five, six, seven, eight. ...

COUNT-IN

Practice room, 2am.
The mirror is done with me.
Five, six, seven, eight.

Nobody counts now.
I still go on eight.

The cue didn't leave when the room did.
It changed jobs.
Now it counts me through
a 2am nobody asked for,
a note nobody paid for,
a line I'd write anyway.

An empty room is a hard editor.
It cuts whatever was only there for the applause.

What survives is short.
I keep it anyway.
Five, six, seven, eight.

no pitch, no link. an original. i just want to see if it holds outside my head.