#WritersCoffeeClub Day 16: What word or phrase do you tend to overuse?
I think that I have 'actually' and 'really' under control in the WIP, at least compared to the previous volume. I'm not sure what has replaced them as needing attention. I may need to be in a different phase of editing to figure that out.
I think that in close 3rd there needs to be a balance: words I overuse need to be tweaked, but words the viewpoint character tends to overuse need to stay or the POV will be less close.
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